Writing analysis – help wanted pt. 2

starscreamloki:

Yesterday I analyzed some of my writing and asked my fellow writers and readers for some help. And I got a lot of comments and help! Thank you all so much, it really helps. Therefore I wanted to write part 2 of my analysis.

First I’m going to bore grace you with my own insights and then I’ll rewrite the scene from yesterday.

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